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Since the death of an actor X. Y has elapsed ten years

Since the death of an actor X. Y has elapsed ten years

Could you please help me to rewrite this sentence.

Since the death of an actor X. Y has elapsed ten years.

I want to use the relative clause.

An actor X. Y., of whom death has elapsed ten years.(I suppose that this sentence is wrong.)

Thank you for your help.



Top Answer/Comment:

First of all, the first sentence needs rewriting because your verb (has elapsed) does not correspond to the subject (ten years). Also, "an actor X.Y." feels strange: an actor indicates you don't know which one it was, but then you know their name and when they died. So let's write that sentence as:

Since the death of actor X, ten years have elapsed. He is remembered fondly.

"I want to use the relative clause." OK, but you cannot stuff those ten years in a relative clause about actor X like you tried to! You can convey the same meaning as your original sentence as follows:

Actor X, since whose death have elapsed ten years, is remembered fondly.

However, a shorter, more to-the-point version that I feel flows a bit more naturally, would be:

Actor X, who died ten years ago, is remembered fondly.

"of whom death has elapsed ten years" => here, you try to make death the subject of elapse, but it is not. It is the years that have elapsed, not the death! I guess this is the reason as well why you wrote has instead of have in your original sentence.

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